Thanks fore the help. Here are a new render. The background is a free photo from Wikipedia.
The "Drako" riders, is a order of strong female warriors. They have strongholds at tops of steep mountains. And they breed there own mounts and various monster underlings. Comments are welcome.
To the X-mass I will be away but I have my portable drawing screen so I can work with the commix. I will need help with the English text for the balloons in the commix. Grateful for a helper.