Tuesday, March 30, 2010

Please help me.

I have a short text here for next movie. But I wrights so bad gingrish so I want some people look at it and find errors and give suggestions to better text. Please post the answer to my mail rastakax@yahoo.com
Or wrights in the comments.

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Some monsters secrete musk how is strongly aphrodisiac for fertile females

4 comments:

  1. Some monsters secrete a musk that is a strong aphrodisiac to fertile females

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  2. Some monsters secrete a musk that is a strong aphrodisiac for fertile females.

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    The musk some monsters secrete is a strong aphrodisiac for fertile females.

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  3. Some monsters musky secretions have a strong aphrodisiac effect for fertile females.

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