Want Want help for English language.

This post maybe not is so wonderful.
It’s a request abut help to make the English text better and free from error.
I’m grateful for help.

BB2 work.

Resent time its have not been much done. My second computer is down so I can not make much render. But I have made some scenes, animations, props and textures. I have lots of c4d files ready to render then I have fix the problems. About 40% of the animations and 10% of the renders are finished. My general aesthetics ambitions are also higher this time. There is much to do before BB2 is ready.