Looks very promising, indeed. However, the 1st part seems a bit dull in comparison. The ruin (I believe) shouldn't be so rectangular in shape and could be shabbier, more fallen to pieces.
The landscape before should either be more lively (green maybe) OR simply devastated, like really dried out desert soil. An animal skull or two would do the trick, for example. Yellowish (light orange) sand would provide a nice contrast to the blue sky. Right now it is simply missing a special touch, if you know what I mean...
Scenes for BB3.
If you have ideas for improvement please tell me.
This seems very promising... can't wait to see your new release! :)
ReplyDeleteWheee, there's a DRAGON behind her !!!
ReplyDeleteLooks very promising, indeed. However, the 1st part seems a bit dull in comparison. The ruin (I believe) shouldn't be so rectangular in shape and could be shabbier, more fallen to pieces.
The landscape before should either be more lively (green maybe) OR simply devastated, like really dried out desert soil. An animal skull or two would do the trick, for example. Yellowish (light orange) sand would provide a nice contrast to the blue sky. Right now it is simply missing a special touch, if you know what I mean...
Just my 2 cents.
Cheers, Jess